I think you might want to keep on improving your drawing skills. It's a nice doodle, but I won't be surprised if people consider it to be ugly for couple of reasons.
Who is the lass on the left?
The text on the right is difficult to read, cramped and hand written.
The text is just... odd. Może angielski nie jest twoją mocną stroną?
The facial expressions look weird. The woman is clearly doing raised eyebrows with tongue out, implying being a bit freaky, or just doing the "tee-hee", while pyke is looking like a sad and angry child...?
Proportions are all over the place. Why is pyke's thigh like 2/3 or 3/4th of her both legs?
Pyke's fingers look like a flaming hot cheeto with a cheese filling.
That being said, consider this an honest critique rather than me trying to call your art shit. Yours isn't, you just need to improve \:)
It is not woman. It's my oc. Also english is good here idk what do you mean. Also proportions are good it's basic anatomy btw. Vivian is slim guy, he is MERMAN(male siren) and he eats poorly btw. Also yes. Vivian is really proud he has Pyke as husband, Pyke is protective and Vivian is silly, he is kinda childish sometimes cuz he never really had good growing up life. He was alone since he was 3. Had to survive in bilgewater's waters on his own btw. And you're really mocking my handwritting? Be better than that, normal people can read it and that's funny cuz I used reference and all so anatomy isn't worst part. Youre really wrong, I can hear you don't know basic anatomy yourself, so before doing POOR critics learn it yourself.
NGL left looked feminine to me so I assumed it's a her saying that, it's not a reach to assume someone saying husband might be the more feminine looking character. I have no idea who Vivian is whatsoever. But if assuming genders is what's wrong in my comment let's say it even underlines rest of what I said.
Vivian is my OC. to ship with pyke. And he is feminine cuz he is literally siren who lurks people into water. And the color of the text is orange. Just use your brain
Pyke has orange colors, Vivian has cyan
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u/dharknesss 2d ago
I think you might want to keep on improving your drawing skills. It's a nice doodle, but I won't be surprised if people consider it to be ugly for couple of reasons.
Who is the lass on the left?
The text on the right is difficult to read, cramped and hand written.
The text is just... odd. Może angielski nie jest twoją mocną stroną?
The facial expressions look weird. The woman is clearly doing raised eyebrows with tongue out, implying being a bit freaky, or just doing the "tee-hee", while pyke is looking like a sad and angry child...?
Proportions are all over the place. Why is pyke's thigh like 2/3 or 3/4th of her both legs?
Pyke's fingers look like a flaming hot cheeto with a cheese filling.
That being said, consider this an honest critique rather than me trying to call your art shit. Yours isn't, you just need to improve \:)