Is this overcooked? After/before

[u/Spare_Rub_4081]

Hey everyone. Just got my first real camera two days ago. I've been playing with Lightroom on rare occasions, but since I now have the means to actually shoot good quality RAWs, I should start working on my processing skills. What's your opinion on this one?

[u/Maverekt]

Looks great! Wouldn’t have been able tell it’s edited without seeing the original