r/fundraisingschool • u/throwawayacc_363828 • 1d ago
I have added one shortened and one detailed description. Is that good practice?
I'd posted it somewhere before then found this sub which I'm glad about.
I couldn't decide which one to write as some said details are nice or some said they're too much to read and some said short ones are easier or some said harder to connect with. So, I wrote both.
The whole description is around 1,600 words (which is a lot I know) but at the start of it I've mentioned it clearly that there's a shortened version and a detailed one. Anyone can read their preferred one.
Short one is first which is less than 400 words which has all the needed details so it covers it up well compactly.
And the longer one has more depth about reasonings and context. So, I was wondering how it might be perceived and if it was okay.
Also, are there any things I should remember about writing the description and any mistakes I should be avoiding?